Wednesday, 11 May 2011
Tuesday, 10 May 2011
Tuesday, 25 January 2011
Synopsis Final Draft
Bob (year 7) walks past the SLC classroom where paired reading is going on. He stops briefly and looks into the room. He moves as if to walk into the room, then stops. He takes a deep breath and walks inside. Mrs Brown shows him to the seat next to Grace (sixth form) and he sits down. He says nothing. Grace smiles and says how she used to be bad at reading but got better with help from teachers. Grace opens the book on the table and Bob starts reading.
After the paired reading, Bob walks out of the classroom and a group of year 10s, 3 boys, see him and make fun of him. He is about to lash out when Grace comes out and tells the bullies to go to lesson. She smiles at Bob and then carries on walking.
Bob walks down a corridor. The bullies follow him and call him names and make fun of him. He tries to ignore them, but they start shoving him. He eventually shouts and hits them.
Grace walks down the corridor and sees the fight. Bob sees her and looks ashamed.
Bob is lying on the grass outside school when Grace comes past. They talk for a bit. Grace says that she was doing work and Bob says that he had detention, then Grace lies down next to him. They talk again and Bob reveals his interest in astronomy.
Bob is sitting in the SLC holding a small book. Grace walks in and sits next to him. She gets a book about astronomy out of her bag and they read that instead of the book Bob has.
Bob and Grace walk out of the classroom. The bullies see them and call Bob names. Bob ignores them and Grace tells them to go to their lesson. Bob walks down the stairs and Grace carries on down the corridor.
Bob walks into the library, the bullies start calling him names again, but Bob completely ignores them. He sits down and starts reading the astronomy book that Grace gave him.
After the paired reading, Bob walks out of the classroom and a group of year 10s, 3 boys, see him and make fun of him. He is about to lash out when Grace comes out and tells the bullies to go to lesson. She smiles at Bob and then carries on walking.
Bob walks down a corridor. The bullies follow him and call him names and make fun of him. He tries to ignore them, but they start shoving him. He eventually shouts and hits them.
Grace walks down the corridor and sees the fight. Bob sees her and looks ashamed.
Bob is lying on the grass outside school when Grace comes past. They talk for a bit. Grace says that she was doing work and Bob says that he had detention, then Grace lies down next to him. They talk again and Bob reveals his interest in astronomy.
Bob is sitting in the SLC holding a small book. Grace walks in and sits next to him. She gets a book about astronomy out of her bag and they read that instead of the book Bob has.
Bob and Grace walk out of the classroom. The bullies see them and call Bob names. Bob ignores them and Grace tells them to go to their lesson. Bob walks down the stairs and Grace carries on down the corridor.
Bob walks into the library, the bullies start calling him names again, but Bob completely ignores them. He sits down and starts reading the astronomy book that Grace gave him.
Synopsis Draft 2
Bob walks past the SLC classroom where paired reading is going on. He stops briefly and looks into the classroom. He goes to walk inside but decides against it. He then takes a deep breath and walks inside. Mrs Brown shows him to the seat next to Grace and he sits down. He’s apprehensive, not wanting to say much, but Grace smiles and says how she used to be bad at reading but got better with help from teachers. This calms him down and makes him comfortable. Grace then opens the book on the table and Bob starts reading.
After the paired reading, Bob walks out of the classroom and the bullies see him and make fun of him. He is about to lash out when Grace comes out and tells the bullies to go to lesson. She then smiles at Bob and then carries on walking.
Bob is walking down a corridor when the bullies start calling him names and making fun of him. He tries to ignore them, but they start shoving him. He eventually shouts and hits them.
Grace walks down the corridor and sees the fight. Bob sees her and looks ashamed.
Bob is lying on the grass outside school when Grace comes past. They talk for a bit, Grace says that she was doing work and Bob says that he had detention, then Grace lies down next to him. They talk again and Bob reveals his interest in astronomy.
Bob is sitting in the SLC holding a small book as Grace enters and sits next to him. She gets a book about astronomy out of her bag and they read that instead of the book Bob has.
Bob walks into the library, the bullies start calling him names again, but Bob completely ignores them. He sits down and starts reading the astronomy book that Grace gave him.
After the paired reading, Bob walks out of the classroom and the bullies see him and make fun of him. He is about to lash out when Grace comes out and tells the bullies to go to lesson. She then smiles at Bob and then carries on walking.
Bob is walking down a corridor when the bullies start calling him names and making fun of him. He tries to ignore them, but they start shoving him. He eventually shouts and hits them.
Grace walks down the corridor and sees the fight. Bob sees her and looks ashamed.
Bob is lying on the grass outside school when Grace comes past. They talk for a bit, Grace says that she was doing work and Bob says that he had detention, then Grace lies down next to him. They talk again and Bob reveals his interest in astronomy.
Bob is sitting in the SLC holding a small book as Grace enters and sits next to him. She gets a book about astronomy out of her bag and they read that instead of the book Bob has.
Bob walks into the library, the bullies start calling him names again, but Bob completely ignores them. He sits down and starts reading the astronomy book that Grace gave him.
Friday, 5 November 2010
Synopsis Draft 1
Bob walks past the SLC classroom where paired reading is going on. He stops briefly and looks into the classroom. He goes to walk inside but decides against it and carries on walking.
He is sitting in English class when Mrs Brown asks him to read a chapter from the book. He can’t. The children behind him start giggling and Bob gets frustrated. They start making fun of Bob and calling him stupid and he lashes out. Mrs Brown sends him outside and gives him a choice between giving him another detention or him going to the paired reading. Bob decides to go to the paired reading.
Bob arrives at the SLC classroom, takes a deep breath and walks inside. Mrs Brown shows him to the seat next to Grace and he sits down. He’s apprehensive, not wanting to say much, but Grace smiles and says how she used to be bad at reading but got better with help from teachers. This calms him down and makes him comfortable. Grace then opens the book on the table and Bob starts reading.
After the paired reading, Bob walks out of the classroom and the bullies see him and make fun of him. He is about to lash out when Grace comes out and tells the bullies to go to lesson. She then smiles at Bob and then carries on walking.
Grace is sitting in class when Bob walks in with Mrs Harper. She explains that Bob has lashed out in class. Grace is shocked and disappointed and Bob is ashamed. Bob sits at the back of the classroom and slumps down in his seat.
Grace walks out of the building after class, sees Bob slumped against the wall, looking at the sky, and walks straight past him.
Bob is walking down a corridor when the bullies start calling him names and making fun of him. He tries to ignore them, but they start shoving him. He eventually shouts and hits them.
Grace walks down the corridor and sees the fight. Bob sees her and looks ashamed.
Bob is lying on the grass outside school when Grace comes past. They talk for a bit, Grace says that she was doing work and Bob says that he had detention, then Grace lies down next to him. They talk again and Bob reveals his interest in astronomy.
Bob is sitting in the SLC holding a small book as Grace enters and sits next to him. She gets a book about astronomy out of her bag and they read that instead of the book Bob has.
Bob walks into the library, the bullies start calling him names again, but Bob completely ignores them. He sits down and starts reading the astronomy book that Grace gave him.
He is sitting in English class when Mrs Brown asks him to read a chapter from the book. He can’t. The children behind him start giggling and Bob gets frustrated. They start making fun of Bob and calling him stupid and he lashes out. Mrs Brown sends him outside and gives him a choice between giving him another detention or him going to the paired reading. Bob decides to go to the paired reading.
Bob arrives at the SLC classroom, takes a deep breath and walks inside. Mrs Brown shows him to the seat next to Grace and he sits down. He’s apprehensive, not wanting to say much, but Grace smiles and says how she used to be bad at reading but got better with help from teachers. This calms him down and makes him comfortable. Grace then opens the book on the table and Bob starts reading.
After the paired reading, Bob walks out of the classroom and the bullies see him and make fun of him. He is about to lash out when Grace comes out and tells the bullies to go to lesson. She then smiles at Bob and then carries on walking.
Grace is sitting in class when Bob walks in with Mrs Harper. She explains that Bob has lashed out in class. Grace is shocked and disappointed and Bob is ashamed. Bob sits at the back of the classroom and slumps down in his seat.
Grace walks out of the building after class, sees Bob slumped against the wall, looking at the sky, and walks straight past him.
Bob is walking down a corridor when the bullies start calling him names and making fun of him. He tries to ignore them, but they start shoving him. He eventually shouts and hits them.
Grace walks down the corridor and sees the fight. Bob sees her and looks ashamed.
Bob is lying on the grass outside school when Grace comes past. They talk for a bit, Grace says that she was doing work and Bob says that he had detention, then Grace lies down next to him. They talk again and Bob reveals his interest in astronomy.
Bob is sitting in the SLC holding a small book as Grace enters and sits next to him. She gets a book about astronomy out of her bag and they read that instead of the book Bob has.
Bob walks into the library, the bullies start calling him names again, but Bob completely ignores them. He sits down and starts reading the astronomy book that Grace gave him.
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